Average rating: | Rated 3.5 of 5. |
Level of importance: | Rated 3 of 5. |
Level of validity: | Rated 4 of 5. |
Level of completeness: | Rated 3 of 5. |
Level of comprehensibility: | Rated 4 of 5. |
Competing interests: | None |
Due to the average person indoors’ increased time, it is essential to study how different building’s features can affect the environmental conditions. This article specifically focuses on an evaluation method for ventilation windows as part of the exterior building wall (closed configuration) starting from Sewell’s transmission theory for walls than the mass law. The authors rigorously first show the difference between these two predictive methods. Moreover, once the Sewell’s one is proved to be more accurate for ventilation windows, they compare its results with the reduction indices experimental ones showing a good agreement while considering a regression analysis as well. They clearly stated their findings imitations and further described how the study could be improved next.
I think that, if appropriately developed, this method could be particularly suitable for indoor environmental design. I have some comments about the article, which I hope will contribute to the readership:
I appreciate the authors’ honesty on the study limitations and further improvements. I am sure that they could include the suggested amendments in this paper and further improvements in their future studies with no effort.
I think that the paper is ready for publication if those minor corrections are added. I focused mainly on these aspects as the other reviewer has already extensively commented on some clarity issue that I recommend as well.