Average rating: | Rated 4.5 of 5. |
Level of importance: | Rated 4 of 5. |
Level of validity: | Rated 4 of 5. |
Level of completeness: | Rated 5 of 5. |
Level of comprehensibility: | Rated 5 of 5. |
Competing interests: | None |
This article has improved immensely since version 1. The author has clearly taken on board the critiques from the reviewers, and provided a much more cohesive and evidence-rich paper. The connection between the case studies and the critique of the OECD principles is much clearer, and the author has engaged more closely with the relevant literature.
One minor suggestion would be to move some of the text in the endnotes into the body of the paper where possible, as these now contain quite a lot of information and nuance.
I look forward to citing this paper in future work.