Average rating: | Rated 3 of 5. |
Level of importance: | Rated 4 of 5. |
Level of validity: | Rated 3 of 5. |
Level of completeness: | Rated 2 of 5. |
Level of comprehensibility: | Rated 2 of 5. |
Competing interests: | None |
This article proposes a new framework based on SDG to analyse the diffusion of sustainability of a given project.
I think the topic is of a great importance for the audience of UCL Open Environment. However, I propose the following changes for the article to be improved:
1. The introduction may focus less on the historical review of the diffusion of sustainability schools and more or current projects that have been implemented worldwide and that have used or could use SDG to analyse the diffusion of sustainability. The authors can provide real life examples to allow the reader undestand the context the proposed approach can be applied to.
2. The whole article would better read if structured as a case study. As it is currently written, it is not immediately clear that the article presents a case study to propose a new framework. I suggest to include the Dingle Peninsula 2030 programme in thte tile and to orient the introduction towards the analysis of this programme, too.