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|Keywords:||Mould growth, Built environment, Coupled heat and moisture transfer, Moisture distribution, Wall-to-floor thermal bridge|
Very interesting article. However, the information and messages the authors want to convey are unclear on several occasions. Proofreading might help to communicate the messages more effectively.
37-39 Could you please rephrase this sentence?
41 This part could be changed: Further, Mould/ indoor surface
41-43 Could you please rephrase this sentence?
44 negative effects … is (are)more apparent
45-47 Could you please rephrase / Also not entirely true (Can provide a few references but it might be a little impolite
(Ilomets, S., Kalamees, T. Evaluation of the criticality of thermal bridges. J Build Rehabil 1, 11 (2016). https://doi.org/10.1007/s41024-016-0005-6
Sedlbauer, K. (2001) Prediction of Mould Fungus Formation on the Surface of and inside Building Components. Ph.D. Dissertation, Stuttgart University, Stuttgart)
50-51 occupies the largest area?
51-52 This a little unclear could you please rephrase?
80-81 Could you please rephrase
82-83 bring out the moisture flow, Eq (7) are used… could you please rephrase
246 Figure 7 The y-axis of this figure is a bit unclear. Could you please explain a little bit more what information does this figure wants to convey?
246-256 I believe it is very difficult for fungi to grow inside such a construction even if the temperature and relative humidity conditions are favourable for growth. Two major reasons for this are 1st) there are no air-gaps between the elements of the construction so it is very unlikely that fungal spores could have been stored and would be able to flourish inside the material and 2nd) the materials used are concrete, expanded polystyrene and autoclaved aerated concrete and cement mortar so the availability of nutrients is debatable.
248-252 Could you please rephrase?
260 The moisture affects the fungal growth. Seasons have an effect on fungal growth because of the changes in temperature and RH.
260-268 These statements might be true for the case examined in the context of this study but they cannot be generalized. The direction of the moisture transfer relies on the internal and external conditions and in different climatic conditions the opposite direction might be the norm.
263-264 Could you please explain this a little more
280-282 Please rephrase
294 Please rephrase
309-310 These conclusions can be drawn only for the cases examined in the context of this paper. Please avoid generalizing these conclusions.
321-322 The 4 and 5 conclusions are debatable. As mentioned earlier it is very unlikely that mould could grow inside the building construction. Therefore, the seasonal effect on the temperature and RH conditions within the construction cannot be used to assess whether the conditions become favourable for mould growth during different seasons.
329-330 Please rephrase.